Yesterday me my cousin by the way she is 6 years old. we went to the big shopping centre my cousin got sum toys and I got sum Jewellery but there was one peer of ear rings that my cousin coco really wanted.but she was not allowed to have them but I was 21 so I was allowed then we went home she left son as we got home so I unpack my shop and I seemed my mum came in with horror but were did it go what my mum said My earring coco I thought until my mum was covering her ears mum
Hi Myah,
I loved your story and its making me curious
” but were did it go”
From catlin
Hello Myah, good job! I thought you described and narrated what was happening very well. Why did you underline mum at the end?